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But listen to me: I will tell you
how to love a bedspread;
a car seat; a sun dress
that you cleaned two months ago.

and should they find her
in the breast of a riverbank
or a cabinet,

I will tell you
facts about scavenger birds;
kettles, wakes and how to chair a committee
with a body on your desk,

as scavenger birds do.
A poem about tragedy poetry. I read once that if you weren't there, you shouldn't talk about it.
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner 2 days ago   General Artist
all too amazing of a piece, awesome person! :tighthug: :heart:
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
love this. read it, understood the title, reread again. beautiful and telling in a discrete way.
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LiliWrites Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is fantastic. Stark and paced perfectly. I do appreciate a well placed line-break. :)
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SacredArtist Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013
Nice Poetry
Jason in Oregon
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Gay-Mountain Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
Cheers
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MeteorSage Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Student Artist
Awesome piece.
I love the subject!
10/10
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Gay-Mountain Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
Hey I'm glad you enjoyed it. Cheers for your comment
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PivotShadow Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013
:iconwhatdoesitmeanplz: It's clearly powerful, but I'm not sure what it's about..can someone tell me?
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Gay-Mountain Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
Hi there, if you have a look on the first page of the comments I actually discussed this a little with :iconim-sabbo: and :iconpepsiboy81: . Thanks for your comment
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MeteorSage Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Student Artist
OP said it was about tragic poetry and then went on to say " if you weren't there, you shouldn't talk about it."
I think it's a narration directed to people who write about tragedies that never affected them in any way other than making them feel a little bad for someone else.
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