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by vespera

I've actually been looking at trying out some prose-poetry lately so was really interested to see you post this. Obviously the imagery ...

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They gave him some shit name
Just like  'ten fingered teddy boy',

But even his dad
Had known the music in him,so he got a guitar
and an amp and a band
And a family

And now
if you want to know about rivers
He'll put something down for you
On vinyl.


But hey, hey!

Did you ever see him on the continent?
He had those kids,

And they bottled daddy's time away
Because he did.


Listen, This is a man who lights forest fires
And steps out on bar fights
And maybe to some he's a flat case
And a black record

But, brother,
That's our father:
There ain't much he can't say
These days

He's got credit for rhythm
And being there in the beginning
Think that you know the metre of her
stony wrists,
shallow breasts:
the breakwaters of her ribs
and the low tide of skin
reaching between her legs.

Forget that she loves to sing
and that she will.
That she does, in fact, enjoy the taste of dried fruit;
that she dresses like a gypsy princess
in hiding
and has never put up with any of your shit.

Certainly, she holds a kind of hunger
in her eyes,

but you can only imagine the damage you could do

a thin girl
as beautiful as a wing.
the taste of dried fruit
Written on a beach and a train in Australia
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I'd rather my name be written in
every bathroom stall in India,
America and Japan:
"Call for a good time."

I'm sure people would rather have the laugh
than the stone line of poetry
with my full name beneath it.


How could i not write the names of trees
and moths over and over:
the deaths head,
the white witch in the she-oak,
the broomsweet and the meadow?
So this is the last journal I'll put up for now. It's a handful of quotes that I keep in my poetry folder and a few poems I missed the first time around.

Quotes
oofpoetry.tumblr.com/post/2944… - Jaime Gil De Bieda
oofpoetry.tumblr.com/post/2759… - Miranda July
oofpoetry.tumblr.com/post/2959… - Galileo Galilei
fuckyeahliteraryquotes.tumblr.… - Ian McEwan
loveyourchaos.tumblr.com/post/… - F. Scott Fitzgerald
loveyourchaos.tumblr.com/post/… - Jeffrey Eugenides
www.goodreads.com/quotes/47037… - Margaret Atwood
25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lzl… - Unknown

www.youtube.com/watch?v=26YLeh… - J. Robert Oppenheimer

Poems
oofpoetry.tumblr.com/post/2532… - Vladimir Mayakovsy
oofpoetry.tumblr.com/post/1900… - Dean Young
oofpoetry.tumblr.com/post/6254… - Ezra Pound
oofpoetry.tumblr.com/post/3908… - Hafiz (really, really enjoyed this and just found out it was written over 700 years ago and he's basically part of Iranian history. What . en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hafez)
loveyourchaos.tumblr.com/post/… Phillip Kaye - from 'Repetition'

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ProtoRepublic Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
I like what you write.
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LadyLincoln Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You've been Featured. :heart:
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Gay-Mountain Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
Hi, sorry it took me so long to reply to this but thanks!Although I do have to ask....Ladies of Lit...I'm not a lady, shouldn't that count against me?
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LadyLincoln Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It was not for Ladies of Lit, it was for my 30 Writers Series.

You're welcome!
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RiseandBe Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome to #PoeticalCondition!
We are happy to include you as one of our members and look forward to your contributions.
We hope to see you as an active part of our humble group.

Your Founder, RiseandBe
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indigo-mouse Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you SO MUCH for suggesting my poem as a daily deviation.
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DannyAnthony Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome to #FreeVersePoetry !!
I hope you enjoy the group, and I look forward to your poems. :D

Your Founder, =DannyAnthony
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who-the-moon-is Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you have a lovely style of poetry and I am glad you are getting attention from this DD, as you clearly deserve it. :) Plus, it helped me find your work! (yay~)
Thanks for sharing what you do.
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Gay-Mountain Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
Hey I'm glad you're enjoying my work. Really, it's an awesome thing to hear, thank you :)
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Clockhound Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Student General Artist
Your username is my favorite thing.
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